After Reginald and I had filmed the footage at my house we
gave it to Shanae and she noticed quite a few bits that went wrong about the
footage and things we needed to change.
Our first problem was the fact that our opening sequence
didn’t include our names and credits to others because we tried to find a place
where it would fit nicely but we couldn’t out it anywhere where it would look
nice and presentable to the audience.
Also, Shanae pointed out that lighting was a clear problem
with the footage from my house since on the first part the lighting is
significantly darker than in the second and the lighting was just way to dim
also the quality of the filming was not as good since towards the end the piece
looked poor in quality. Also in the first part Artan (the main character) he
wore a red blanket but what Shanae pointed out is that there is footage of him
without the blanket but no footage of him taking it off.
She also pointed out that the papers were not as convincing
which was my fault since from close up they looked quite professional and
something he would be obsessed with but from far away I agree did not give the
same effect and that means the Mise en scene was not particularly convincing
for the piece.
We
had also watched the clip back and had seen that what Artan was wearing was a
shirt and trousers which in Shanae’s opinion was not very good for the
storyline, I disagree since a conventional detective even if after being fired
doesn’t really seems to care what he wears and I think the fact that he is
obsessed with his career makes him obsessed to continue wearing the same
clothing so he can convince himself he can still do his job even though he has
been fired. But as a group we collectively agreed that it would be better for
him to not be wearing that and wearing something different to portray his
character.
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